Senin, 02 Juni 2014

THE NEXT TASK FOR MEETING 8


" Explain why teens smoke cigarettes"

Teenagers in today usually smoke because they are searching for answers to try to be " cool " or trying to be " adult ". Sometimes, teenagers see their parents smoke or want to do it because teens see their parents smoking. It 's also the factor why the youth of today have started smoking , from junior high school , senior high school , Student , Adult , etc. This is a big problem because they want to be like their parents and they also want to feel like an adult. Another opinion about teen smoking is trying to change their mood if their lives were difficult. Many adults and adolescents also experience depression and when they feel sad , they found cigarettes to " help " them when they 're sad. Not everyone with it smoking but most teenagers now many are using cigarettes or when being depressed though. Sometimes, teenagers see their friends doing it also encourages them to smoke. Their friends who also want to smoke. Most of the time they use to smoke either at home , school , or while hanging out with his friends. When someone says no to smoking , people who smoke will say , " Why do not you smoke , smoke that's cool , if you do not want to smoke , then you do not like our slang. Everyone smoked and that makes it cool ". It 's also what ultimately makes youth of today are deciding to smoke. However, consumption of cigarettes you smoke it does not make you happier , it will make you feel sad cigarettes because there are hazardous materials contained therein including nicotine, nicotine will make you addicted to smoking because of the effects of hormones. It can cause cancer anywhere in your body. Do you want that to happen to your body ? It can kill you. And more than 80,000 young people worldwide start smoking every day. Most people start smoking when they are teenagers , and that makes it more difficult to quit smoking. The earlier the habit begins , the more difficult to stop , even though many teens make several attempts to quit smoking. There are three main reasons why teens start smoking when they are bored , lose weight , and in response to the stress of school and family life. Just as her teenage thing to not act as if they are someone special or dangerous. By smoking they can act on those feelings. Because once they are prohibited from smoking it is increasingly becoming more appealing to teenagers or curious. The problem is when they first had to know what it holds or cigarettes then onwards they will become addicted. The view that they have violated the law or against the parents and the school then they will be addicted in itself. Children also want to get attention , no matter if it's good attention or bad attention. They want the attention of the people around him and they think by smoking they get big attention. Usually parents do not allow underage teen age to smoke. Therefore, the smoke became very attractive to them. Nowadays teenagers smoking for other reasons. Maybe they stress or pressure due to economic and personal problems. Or maybe they are unemployed or working but not making enough money to take care of themselves and their families. All of these people may smoke to feel relaxed or to give them energy while. Smoking reduces a person's appetite. Finally , there are people who say that they like to smoke. Because smoking gives them pleasure and feel comfortable. Everyone knows how dangerous smoking. There is no controversy about the facts of smoking. Test studies have confirmed and proven link between smoking and cancer , lung disease and chronic heart disease. Each year , smoking kills 4 million people around the world , 1 person every 8 seconds. 10 million cigarettes are sold per minute , more than 105 billion every week. It is estimated that 1 in 3 adults smoke , with over 1.2 billion people smoke worldwide. But it's not just about adults. Among these young adolescents , aged 13 to 15 , about 1 in 5 smoking throughout the world. Every day between 80,000 and 100,000 children worldwide start smoking. And about 50 % of the people who start smoking and teens continue to smoke for 15 to 20 years. Half of long-term smokers will die from tobacco. Every cigarette smoked cuts at least five minutes of life on average about the time it takes to smoke it. Smoking is the single greatest cause of preventable illness and premature death. It is a major factor in heart disease , stroke and chronic lung disease. It can cause lung cancer , larynx , esophagus , mouth , and bladder , and contributes to cancer of the cervix , pancreas , and kidneys. More than 4,000 toxic or carcinogenic chemicals have been found in tobacco smoke.           

" Say no to smoking teenagers "           

You may feel as if teenagers do not hear a word you say , but say it anyway. Tell teens that smoking is not allowed. Disapproval you will have more impact than you think. Teens whose parents set or prohibit smoking restrictions tend to smoke fewer than teens whose parents do not set limits on smoking. Teens tend to think that bad things happen only to other people. But most teenagers think of cancer , heart attacks and strokes occur only in the abstract. Take an active stance against teen smoking. Participate in local and school smoking campaign sponsored prevention. Supports efforts to make public places smoke-free and increase taxes on tobacco products. Your actions can help reduce the likelihood that adolescents will become a smoker. If the teen has started smoking , avoid threats and ultimatums. Instead , find out why teens smoke and discuss ways to help teens quit smoking. Avoiding or quitting smoking is one of the best things your teen can do for a lifetime of good health and because health care is expensive .

Jumat, 16 Mei 2014

THE NEXT TASK FOR MEETING 7

" A person you admire "

Telling someone that I admire the most important and foremost are my parents. Because without them I probably would not be born in this world and not be able to see the world. They are the pride and joy of my life. And I thank those who have raised me to this day. One thing I still want to give them as much as they are happy and my best to make him proud and happy over my success. So, I love and cherish them. My father is someone who hard works with already 41 years old while my mother a housewife with 38 years of age can only help as best it alone. My father had 14 years working in Jakarta and I live with my mother and brother alone. Actually, my heart can not bear to see my parents laboriously to finance college but what could I expect her to college then it's the only way to make me become a successful person and can boast that they are dreams and they are my expectations. I promised myself that I wanted to be successful and want to make him proud of the results and hard work. I just want to see them smiling happily at me. Actually, my little heart is always crying when considering the hard work of my parents, it hurt to see them worked hard for the money, can not bear to see him like that. I was once told you should not otherwise afford college but my parents say if you're not college so what if it only works alone and therefore I obey my parents willingness to college and thank God I was in college and still able to until now. And the people I admire are also Armada Band since the first band I really liked it since I was in junior high school band is a band that is well known. Armada is a music group from Indonesia which was formed in 2007 with the initial name of Kertas . This band consists of 5 members, namely Rizal ( vocals ) , Radha & Mai ( guitar ) , Andit ( drums ) , and Endra ( bass ) . This music genre is pop . Armada is the new name in the music of Indonesia . But its personnel have long circulated in the music of Indonesia . Armada previous band under the name Kertas Band . Kertas Band is one band that shines from the city of Palembang . The song , entitled " Lover not considered " became hits , almost in all corners of Indonesia in a fairly long time. And having considered thoroughly , they finally decided to look for a new label and change the name of their band into Armada Band . With a slight change due to the formation of one of its personnel Argha ( Guitaris 1 Kertas ) withdrew because of severe depression and no longer hold back the burden of this complex issue. And his position is now filled by his cousin Mai ( former guitarist LaRocca band ). Finally Armada Band was formed in Jakarta in mid-October 2007. The band formerly based in Palembang has launched her first album in 2008 , titled " Revenge " with a single pledge " Failed Sex " and other songs of enough hits , including : Haunting ( Revenge ) , not god , what Find What You're , you think I am , etc. . Hits are enough to get a special place in the hearts of Indonesian music fans . Proven Hits " Revenge " successful prestigious positions in many radio stations across Indonesia in the period quite a long time . Bands are very strong character and a different musical genres Armada band made ​​increasingly enjoy doing by all lovers of Indonesian music . And among this Armada personnel I most admire and I idolize is Rizal Armada . I know this biographical data about rizal.
Full Name : Rizal Adi Tsandi Pradana
Nickname : Rizal Armada
Place of Birth : Palembang
Date of Birth : January 4, 1986
High school : SMK Negeri 2 Palembang
Age : 28
Rizal "Armada" Has Full name Tsandi Rizal Adi Pradana Born in Palembang On January 4, 1986 Date of this. Have one mother , father and one sister who lives in his native city of Palembang precisely in Dwikora Regional , District West Ilir 1 which is the lead singer of the band Kertas , before becoming a vocalist Armada. According to Rizal on outside musicians that she 's favorites , considers Paul McCartney and John Lennon as musical gods. In Armada, Rizal position Vocals , Rizal 've won a few tournaments / competitions Sing ( Sports Vocals ) at the time in the city of Palembang few years ago. Rizal went to SMK Negeri 2 Palembang Demat Road Width leaves , it took the Department of TGB ( Architecture Engineering ) which is not far from his home , More than 500 Meters. After graduating rizal to continue his education at SMK Negeri Sriwijaya Polytechnic State Srijaya Road , Big Hill , Palembang. However Continuing to college is not the intention of the Tsandi Rizal himself , he was forced by his father to go to college , his father even willing to sell a few acres of land in Palembang to finance Rizal Lecture , after some persuasion before he would be accepted Rizal Continuing his education at California State Srwijaya for 3 years taking D3. Rizal after classes and some of her friends often hang out - Hang out at Market 16 ( Ampera ) without a clear purpose , even Rizal had buskers Being in intersection Big in the Big City of Palembang , from there they began meeting was the Drummer Andith and Argha the guitar. Armada band also never get a blank / Winning several tournaments / competitions Sing ( Sports Vocals ) at the time in the city of Palembang few years ago. I also have other personnel data from a Armada that is Andith Armada band ( drummer ) Born in Palembang , May 19, 1986 , Mai Armada ( Guitarist ) Born in Palembang , June 23, 1985 , Endra Armada ( Bass ) Born 29 November 1983 in Palembang , Radha Armada ( Guitarist ) Born in Palembang , August 29, 1985.
That was the description of the people I admire in my life . For me all the people in my life that I was a man I admired and loved .

Senin, 28 April 2014

THE NEXT TASK FOR MEETING 6

"If i could go back in time"
If I could go back in time there are many things I would do. Early started about 3 years ago, precisely in 2010/2011 when I was in Grade 3 SMK I almost lost my life because of a guy that I like / love. When he decided to split up and put an end to this relationship, I lost my mind and make sense of frustration and lost, so I was willing to do silly things in my life. Maybe for some people this is impossible or crazy, why I can do this. It was also blinded me to do this sort of thing without thinking about how future. What is the fate of my parents if I do this for sure they will be very disappointed with me. I realize every relationship there will be issues, problems, and feel tired / exhausted. But if we can overcome the problem that small then we are able to handle a larger problem because this is a trial in life and in a relationship. Depending on how we deal with the problem itself. And time continues to spin from time to time from day to day over the years I think more consciously and more mature in taking the decision not to do it again in my life, because it is a crazy thing when it's done. And I am aware of the events that had to not repeat it. And now I realize how reckless I so could do that. Finally, I was now more mature longer to make decisions, determine which ones are good and which are bad for my life. Because women were to be protected is not used as a game. Next thing I would do is I would make my parents proud of me, and I want to raise my parents Hajj with my own hard work. Because they have been painstakingly worked hard to pay my tuition until now and now I want to make them happy with their dispatch to the holy land. God willing, if this is all intentional surely Allah will provide a way for my future later. With so makes me human devotion to both parents. Now I look forward to my future and the future of life now, and I want to make everyone proud and happy for my record. I will do my best and better for the people I love. It's no longer staring past it was just a memory to be remembered not for the future .

Selasa, 22 April 2014

THE NEXT TASK FOR MEETING 5



DEFINITION OF NARRATIVE WRITING

NARRATIVE WRITING relates a clear sequence of events that occurs over time. Both what happens and the order in which the events occur are communicated to the reader. Effective narration requires a writer to give a clear sequence of events (fictional or non-fictional) and to provide elaboration. A narrative is some kind of retelling, often in words (though it is possible to mime a story), of something that happened (a story). The narrative is not the story itself but rather the telling of the story -- which is why it is so often used in phrases such as "written narrative," "oral narrative," etc. While a story just is a sequence of events, a narrative recounts those events, perhaps leaving some occurrences out because they are from some perspective insignificant, and perhaps emphasizing others. In a series of events, a car crash takes a split second. A narrative account, however, might be almost entirely about the crash itself and the few seconds leading up to it. Narratives thus shape history (the series of events, the story of what happened). Generally, writing about an event in a personal way. Narrative writing is a Generally, writing about an event in a personal way. Narrative writing is agenerally fictional prose, though there are some narrative poems. Essentially, a narrative tells a story. In this respect it differs from, say, introsepctive writing. Writing that tells a story. Narrative is a report of related events presented to the listeners or readers in words arranged in a logical sequence. A story is taken as a synonym of narrative. A narrative or story is told by a narrator who may be a direct part of that experience and he or she often shares the experience as a first-person narrator. Sometimes he or she may only observe the events as a third-person narrator and gives his or her verdict.

How to differ from other writing genres

Four Major Types of Essays
Distinguishing between types of essays is simply a matter of determining the writer’s goal. Does the writer want to tell about a personal experience, describe something, explain an issue, or convince the reader to accept a certain viewpoint? The four major types of essays address these purposes:
1. Narrative Essays: Telling a Story
In a narrative essay, the writer tells a story about a real-life experience. While telling a story may sound easy to do, the narrative essay challenges students to think and write about themselves. When writing a narrative essay, writers should try to involve the reader by making the story as vivid as possible. The fact that narrative essays are usually written in the first person helps engage the reader. “I” sentences give readers a feeling of being part of the story. A well-crafted narrative essay will also build towards drawing a conclusion or making a personal statement.
2. Descriptive Essays: Painting a Picture
A cousin of the narrative essay, a descriptive essay paints a picture with words. A writer might describe a person, place, object, or even memory of special significance. However, this type of essay is not description for description’s sake. The descriptive essay strives to communicate a deeper meaning through the description. In a descriptive essay, the writer should show, not tell, through the use of colorful words and sensory details. The best descriptive essays appeal to the reader’s emotions, with a result that is highly evocative.
3. Expository Essays: Just the Facts
The expository essay is an informative piece of writing that presents a balanced analysis of a topic. In an expository essay, the writer explains or defines a topic, using facts, statistics, and examples. Expository writing encompasses a wide range of essay variations, such as the comparison and contrast essay, the cause and effect essay, and the “how to” or process essay. Because expository essays are based on facts and not personal feelings, writers don’t reveal their emotions or write in the first person.
4. Persuasive Essays: Convince Me
While like an expository essay in its presentation of facts, the goal of the persuasive essay is to convince the reader to accept the writer’s point of view or recommendation. The writer must build a case using facts and logic, as well as examples, expert opinion, and sound reasoning. The writer should present all sides of the argument, but must be able to communicate clearly and without equivocation why a certain position is correct.

Write the steps how to make a narrative writing

A narrative text consists of the following structure: 
1. Orientation : Introducing the participants and informing the time and the place. it also introduce some characters involved in the genre.
Example : Once Upon , there was a local ruler named King Sulahkromo thing . Prime Minister King has named Raden Sidopekso . Prime Minister 's wife has named Sri Tanjung . She is so beautiful and sweet that the king wanted her to be his wife .

2. Complication : Describing the rising crises which the participants have to do with or among participants relationship in a process of social interaction.
Example : One day , the King sent the Prime Minister for long missions . While the Prime Minister went , the King tried to get Sri Tanjung . But the king failed . He was very angry and upset . So , when Sidopekso back , the King told him that his wife was unfaithful to him . Prime Minister is very angry with his wife . Sri Tanjung said that was not true .
3. Resolution : Showing the way of participant to solve the crises, better or worse. The end can be open ended or close ended.
Example : However , Sidopekso said that he would kill her . She took him to the river bank . Before he killed him and threw him into the river , he said that he will be proven innocent Once Sidopekso kill him , he threw his body into the river dirty . River soon became clean and start spreading the wonderful aroma and very fragrant . Sidopekso said , " ... Banyu Wangi ... Banyuwangi " . It means ' fragrant water ' . Banyuwangi proof of love born of noble and sacred . that's the origin of the town of Banyuwangi .
4. Re-orientation
Here is It consists of a moral message/lesson, advice or teaching from the writer.


SHOWING THE TOPIC SENTENCES OF THE STORY

Failure in a life
Failure is not the end of the struggle , but it is a way to reach the goal . Man was created filled with limitations. Want to not have a lot of money , want the house yet to work , want a job well established yet graduated college , want to be successful but the mission and vision of life has not been settled .
Truly Allah is Fair has created the whole universe , with all the limitations that exist , human beings occupy the highest place of Allah than others . He gives us a sense to enhance our limitations , He gave us a conscience that never lie , He also gives us a beautiful corpse again perfect .
" Why is my life always like this ,  fail and by no means? "
" Will there be a tomorrow full of bubbly for I ? "
" Shall Allah forgiveness is there for I ? "
" Are there any future for I ? "
As if my little heart wondering , there still future better for me .Wonderful future for me to live . I'm still confused by all of this , why there should be a failure in life , as if in a life no failure then everyone would be successful and there are no poor . This question is always there in every human soul . Great desire to live a quiet , happy , success is the dream of all of us. The desire to achieve success , Achievement , innovative , productive lies in how much we are able to put themselves in the Allah who has created us with all these limitations . We have never been able to resist the deadly pick at any time . We also never be able to act when the maximum effort has turned out we still failed. Nor can we delay the age has been increased . What can we do ? We as humans just could not accept what has been given by Allah.
About 2 years ago I had never experienced anything that made me give up and do not want to continue it all. When I want to sign up to a college that I dreamed and dreamed not received it which made me give up on applying to other universities . That morning around 08:00 pm I was with my uncle went to the Jakarta State University to register as a prospective student there . At that moment I select Prodi Busana Butik is because there is still time to do with my expertise in vocational schools first so I decided to continue her education with study programs that I like . And then I was required to pay a registration fee around Rp.250,000 , - . Jakarta State University itself is located in Rawamangun , East Jakarta , the university was also very spacious and looks beautiful . Tomorrow day I start running tests . And at that time registration began at 08:00 and I was in a test with 100 questions given general within 120 minutes and at that time I was working on the matter very carefully and cautiously and eventually time ran out . After working on the tests I went home to Tangerang to rest , a place where my father worked and lived there . Already 11 years my father worked in Jakarta and if there is a need then he returned to Lampung for a few days . A few days later the announcement of a candidate for student / i at the Jakarta State University was already spread through online , and I can not wait to see result . I went to check whether I was accepted or not at the university , and in the end the things I 've been waiting for is not satisfactory for me because I was not welcome at the University . My feelings were mixed time between sad , disappointed , and angry because the University does not accept that I liked and I decided to go to Lampung . And after I arrived in Lampung STAIN I also signed up in Metro City . At that moment I experienced a failure , I signed up there already 3x not received well and I was desperate not want to study anymore . And on the last registration I decided to enroll at the Muhammadiyah University of Metro . In the latter option eventually I was accepted at the University although not my choice but I live to this day . I began to accept and love it even though the heart does not want to be in this university but I'm glad to be part of the Muhammadiyah University.

Topic Sentence
Reason
Failure is not the end of the struggle , but it is a way to reach the goal . Man was created filled with limitations.
This is because the topic sentence is the main idea is to build the next sentence.
He gives us a sense to enhance our limitations , He gave us a conscience that never lie , He also gives us a beautiful corpse again perfect.

This is the next topic sentence because this sentence is the sentence supporting details.
About 2 years ago I had never experienced anything that made me give up and do not want to continue it all. When I want to sign
This is called the topic sentence and the next sentence tells the full story of this paragraph
Tomorrow day I start running tests . And at that time registration began at 08:00 and I was in a test with 100 questions given general within 120 minutes and at that time I was working on the matter very carefully and cautiously and eventually time ran out .

This is the topic sentence because the next sentence tells about the tests that are being implemented
In the latter option eventually I was accepted at the University although not my choice but I live to this day . I began to accept and love it even though the heart does not want to be in this university but I'm glad to be part of the Muhammadiyah University .
This is the topic sentence because the next sentence tells about the announcement

Note:
The underlined sentence is the topic sentence because it is the main story line and the first part of the story. All the sentences after the sentence is the topic sentence support. They describe all the events that happen later made ​​a topic sentence that provides news and provide cover at each end of the story.