Senin, 28 April 2014

THE NEXT TASK FOR MEETING 6

"If i could go back in time"
If I could go back in time there are many things I would do. Early started about 3 years ago, precisely in 2010/2011 when I was in Grade 3 SMK I almost lost my life because of a guy that I like / love. When he decided to split up and put an end to this relationship, I lost my mind and make sense of frustration and lost, so I was willing to do silly things in my life. Maybe for some people this is impossible or crazy, why I can do this. It was also blinded me to do this sort of thing without thinking about how future. What is the fate of my parents if I do this for sure they will be very disappointed with me. I realize every relationship there will be issues, problems, and feel tired / exhausted. But if we can overcome the problem that small then we are able to handle a larger problem because this is a trial in life and in a relationship. Depending on how we deal with the problem itself. And time continues to spin from time to time from day to day over the years I think more consciously and more mature in taking the decision not to do it again in my life, because it is a crazy thing when it's done. And I am aware of the events that had to not repeat it. And now I realize how reckless I so could do that. Finally, I was now more mature longer to make decisions, determine which ones are good and which are bad for my life. Because women were to be protected is not used as a game. Next thing I would do is I would make my parents proud of me, and I want to raise my parents Hajj with my own hard work. Because they have been painstakingly worked hard to pay my tuition until now and now I want to make them happy with their dispatch to the holy land. God willing, if this is all intentional surely Allah will provide a way for my future later. With so makes me human devotion to both parents. Now I look forward to my future and the future of life now, and I want to make everyone proud and happy for my record. I will do my best and better for the people I love. It's no longer staring past it was just a memory to be remembered not for the future .

Selasa, 22 April 2014

THE NEXT TASK FOR MEETING 5



DEFINITION OF NARRATIVE WRITING

NARRATIVE WRITING relates a clear sequence of events that occurs over time. Both what happens and the order in which the events occur are communicated to the reader. Effective narration requires a writer to give a clear sequence of events (fictional or non-fictional) and to provide elaboration. A narrative is some kind of retelling, often in words (though it is possible to mime a story), of something that happened (a story). The narrative is not the story itself but rather the telling of the story -- which is why it is so often used in phrases such as "written narrative," "oral narrative," etc. While a story just is a sequence of events, a narrative recounts those events, perhaps leaving some occurrences out because they are from some perspective insignificant, and perhaps emphasizing others. In a series of events, a car crash takes a split second. A narrative account, however, might be almost entirely about the crash itself and the few seconds leading up to it. Narratives thus shape history (the series of events, the story of what happened). Generally, writing about an event in a personal way. Narrative writing is a Generally, writing about an event in a personal way. Narrative writing is agenerally fictional prose, though there are some narrative poems. Essentially, a narrative tells a story. In this respect it differs from, say, introsepctive writing. Writing that tells a story. Narrative is a report of related events presented to the listeners or readers in words arranged in a logical sequence. A story is taken as a synonym of narrative. A narrative or story is told by a narrator who may be a direct part of that experience and he or she often shares the experience as a first-person narrator. Sometimes he or she may only observe the events as a third-person narrator and gives his or her verdict.

How to differ from other writing genres

Four Major Types of Essays
Distinguishing between types of essays is simply a matter of determining the writer’s goal. Does the writer want to tell about a personal experience, describe something, explain an issue, or convince the reader to accept a certain viewpoint? The four major types of essays address these purposes:
1. Narrative Essays: Telling a Story
In a narrative essay, the writer tells a story about a real-life experience. While telling a story may sound easy to do, the narrative essay challenges students to think and write about themselves. When writing a narrative essay, writers should try to involve the reader by making the story as vivid as possible. The fact that narrative essays are usually written in the first person helps engage the reader. “I” sentences give readers a feeling of being part of the story. A well-crafted narrative essay will also build towards drawing a conclusion or making a personal statement.
2. Descriptive Essays: Painting a Picture
A cousin of the narrative essay, a descriptive essay paints a picture with words. A writer might describe a person, place, object, or even memory of special significance. However, this type of essay is not description for description’s sake. The descriptive essay strives to communicate a deeper meaning through the description. In a descriptive essay, the writer should show, not tell, through the use of colorful words and sensory details. The best descriptive essays appeal to the reader’s emotions, with a result that is highly evocative.
3. Expository Essays: Just the Facts
The expository essay is an informative piece of writing that presents a balanced analysis of a topic. In an expository essay, the writer explains or defines a topic, using facts, statistics, and examples. Expository writing encompasses a wide range of essay variations, such as the comparison and contrast essay, the cause and effect essay, and the “how to” or process essay. Because expository essays are based on facts and not personal feelings, writers don’t reveal their emotions or write in the first person.
4. Persuasive Essays: Convince Me
While like an expository essay in its presentation of facts, the goal of the persuasive essay is to convince the reader to accept the writer’s point of view or recommendation. The writer must build a case using facts and logic, as well as examples, expert opinion, and sound reasoning. The writer should present all sides of the argument, but must be able to communicate clearly and without equivocation why a certain position is correct.

Write the steps how to make a narrative writing

A narrative text consists of the following structure: 
1. Orientation : Introducing the participants and informing the time and the place. it also introduce some characters involved in the genre.
Example : Once Upon , there was a local ruler named King Sulahkromo thing . Prime Minister King has named Raden Sidopekso . Prime Minister 's wife has named Sri Tanjung . She is so beautiful and sweet that the king wanted her to be his wife .

2. Complication : Describing the rising crises which the participants have to do with or among participants relationship in a process of social interaction.
Example : One day , the King sent the Prime Minister for long missions . While the Prime Minister went , the King tried to get Sri Tanjung . But the king failed . He was very angry and upset . So , when Sidopekso back , the King told him that his wife was unfaithful to him . Prime Minister is very angry with his wife . Sri Tanjung said that was not true .
3. Resolution : Showing the way of participant to solve the crises, better or worse. The end can be open ended or close ended.
Example : However , Sidopekso said that he would kill her . She took him to the river bank . Before he killed him and threw him into the river , he said that he will be proven innocent Once Sidopekso kill him , he threw his body into the river dirty . River soon became clean and start spreading the wonderful aroma and very fragrant . Sidopekso said , " ... Banyu Wangi ... Banyuwangi " . It means ' fragrant water ' . Banyuwangi proof of love born of noble and sacred . that's the origin of the town of Banyuwangi .
4. Re-orientation
Here is It consists of a moral message/lesson, advice or teaching from the writer.


SHOWING THE TOPIC SENTENCES OF THE STORY

Failure in a life
Failure is not the end of the struggle , but it is a way to reach the goal . Man was created filled with limitations. Want to not have a lot of money , want the house yet to work , want a job well established yet graduated college , want to be successful but the mission and vision of life has not been settled .
Truly Allah is Fair has created the whole universe , with all the limitations that exist , human beings occupy the highest place of Allah than others . He gives us a sense to enhance our limitations , He gave us a conscience that never lie , He also gives us a beautiful corpse again perfect .
" Why is my life always like this ,  fail and by no means? "
" Will there be a tomorrow full of bubbly for I ? "
" Shall Allah forgiveness is there for I ? "
" Are there any future for I ? "
As if my little heart wondering , there still future better for me .Wonderful future for me to live . I'm still confused by all of this , why there should be a failure in life , as if in a life no failure then everyone would be successful and there are no poor . This question is always there in every human soul . Great desire to live a quiet , happy , success is the dream of all of us. The desire to achieve success , Achievement , innovative , productive lies in how much we are able to put themselves in the Allah who has created us with all these limitations . We have never been able to resist the deadly pick at any time . We also never be able to act when the maximum effort has turned out we still failed. Nor can we delay the age has been increased . What can we do ? We as humans just could not accept what has been given by Allah.
About 2 years ago I had never experienced anything that made me give up and do not want to continue it all. When I want to sign up to a college that I dreamed and dreamed not received it which made me give up on applying to other universities . That morning around 08:00 pm I was with my uncle went to the Jakarta State University to register as a prospective student there . At that moment I select Prodi Busana Butik is because there is still time to do with my expertise in vocational schools first so I decided to continue her education with study programs that I like . And then I was required to pay a registration fee around Rp.250,000 , - . Jakarta State University itself is located in Rawamangun , East Jakarta , the university was also very spacious and looks beautiful . Tomorrow day I start running tests . And at that time registration began at 08:00 and I was in a test with 100 questions given general within 120 minutes and at that time I was working on the matter very carefully and cautiously and eventually time ran out . After working on the tests I went home to Tangerang to rest , a place where my father worked and lived there . Already 11 years my father worked in Jakarta and if there is a need then he returned to Lampung for a few days . A few days later the announcement of a candidate for student / i at the Jakarta State University was already spread through online , and I can not wait to see result . I went to check whether I was accepted or not at the university , and in the end the things I 've been waiting for is not satisfactory for me because I was not welcome at the University . My feelings were mixed time between sad , disappointed , and angry because the University does not accept that I liked and I decided to go to Lampung . And after I arrived in Lampung STAIN I also signed up in Metro City . At that moment I experienced a failure , I signed up there already 3x not received well and I was desperate not want to study anymore . And on the last registration I decided to enroll at the Muhammadiyah University of Metro . In the latter option eventually I was accepted at the University although not my choice but I live to this day . I began to accept and love it even though the heart does not want to be in this university but I'm glad to be part of the Muhammadiyah University.

Topic Sentence
Reason
Failure is not the end of the struggle , but it is a way to reach the goal . Man was created filled with limitations.
This is because the topic sentence is the main idea is to build the next sentence.
He gives us a sense to enhance our limitations , He gave us a conscience that never lie , He also gives us a beautiful corpse again perfect.

This is the next topic sentence because this sentence is the sentence supporting details.
About 2 years ago I had never experienced anything that made me give up and do not want to continue it all. When I want to sign
This is called the topic sentence and the next sentence tells the full story of this paragraph
Tomorrow day I start running tests . And at that time registration began at 08:00 and I was in a test with 100 questions given general within 120 minutes and at that time I was working on the matter very carefully and cautiously and eventually time ran out .

This is the topic sentence because the next sentence tells about the tests that are being implemented
In the latter option eventually I was accepted at the University although not my choice but I live to this day . I began to accept and love it even though the heart does not want to be in this university but I'm glad to be part of the Muhammadiyah University .
This is the topic sentence because the next sentence tells about the announcement

Note:
The underlined sentence is the topic sentence because it is the main story line and the first part of the story. All the sentences after the sentence is the topic sentence support. They describe all the events that happen later made ​​a topic sentence that provides news and provide cover at each end of the story.

Senin, 07 April 2014

Identifying narrative paragraph with and without topic sentence


Failure in a life
Failure is not the end of the struggle , but it is a way to reach the goal . Man was created filled with limitations. Want to not have a lot of money , want the house yet to work , want a job well established yet graduated college , want to be successful but the mission and vision of life has not been settled .
Truly Allah is Fair has created the whole universe , with all the limitations that exist , human beings occupy the highest place of Allah than others . He gives us a sense to enhance our limitations , He gave us a conscience that never lie , He also gives us a beautiful corpse again perfect .
" Why is my life always like this ,  fail and by no means? "
" Will there be a tomorrow full of bubbly for I ? "
" Shall Allah forgiveness is there for I ? "
" Are there any future for I ? "
As if my little heart wondering , there still future better for me .Wonderful future for me to live . I'm still confused by all of this , why there should be a failure in life , as if in a life no failure then everyone would be successful and there are no poor . This question is always there in every human soul . Great desire to live a quiet , happy , success is the dream of all of us. The desire to achieve success , Achievement , innovative , productive lies in how much we are able to put themselves in the Allah who has created us with all these limitations . We have never been able to resist the deadly pick at any time . We also never be able to act when the maximum effort has turned out we still failed. Nor can we delay the age has been increased . What can we do ? We as humans just could not accept what has been given by Allah.
About 2 years ago I had never experienced anything that made me give up and do not want to continue it all. When I want to sign up to a college that I dreamed and dreamed not received it which made me give up on applying to other universities . That morning around 08:00 pm I was with my uncle went to the Jakarta State University to register as a prospective student there . At that moment I select Prodi Busana Butik is because there is still time to do with my expertise in vocational schools first so I decided to continue her education with study programs that I like . And then I was required to pay a registration fee around Rp.250,000 , - . Jakarta State University itself is located in Rawamangun , East Jakarta , the university was also very spacious and looks beautiful . Tomorrow day I start running tests . And at that time registration began at 08:00 and I was in a test with 100 questions given general within 120 minutes and at that time I was working on the matter very carefully and cautiously and eventually time ran out . After working on the tests I went home to Tangerang to rest , a place where my father worked and lived there . Already 11 years my father worked in Jakarta and if there is a need then he returned to Lampung for a few days . A few days later the announcement of a candidate for student / i at the Jakarta State University was already spread through online , and I can not wait to see result . I went to check whether I was accepted or not at the university , and in the end the things I 've been waiting for is not satisfactory for me because I was not welcome at the University . My feelings were mixed time between sad , disappointed , and angry because the University does not accept that I liked and I decided to go to Lampung . And after I arrived in Lampung STAIN I also signed up in Metro City . At that moment I experienced a failure , I signed up there already 3x not received well and I was desperate not want to study anymore . And on the last registration I decided to enroll at the Muhammadiyah University of Metro . In the latter option eventually I was accepted at the University although not my choice but I live to this day . I began to accept and love it even though the heart does not want to be in this university but I'm glad to be part of the Muhammadiyah University .



NOTE :
Analyze the text
Theme                         : Failure in a life
Cha                                         Characteristic Dyah   : easy to give up, passion, want to get up
Her                                          Her parent                  : Care
Uncle                           : Care and Good
Introduction                :  About 2 years ago I had never experienced anything that made me give up and do not want to continue it all
Plot                              : Forward - Back
Climax                         : And on the last registration I decided to enroll at the Muhammadiyah University of Metro . In the latter option eventually I was accepted at the University although not my choice but I live to this day . I began to accept and love it even though the heart does not want to be in this university but I'm glad to be part of the Muhammadiyah University .
RED                            : Orientation 
BLUE                          : Complication
GREEN                      : Reorientation
            DARK BLUE             : Coda


Rabu, 02 April 2014

Candles that faithfully accompany

Kadang masalah adalah sahabat terbaikmu. Mereka buatmu jadi lebih kuat, dan buatmu menempatkan Tuhan di sisimu yang paling dekat.  
Jangan yakinkan diri bahwa dia menyukaimu, hanya karena dia bersikap manis padamu. Kadang kamu hanya sebuah pilihan ketika dia bosan.
Jangan pernah meremehkan diri sendiri. Jika kamu tak bahagia dengan hidupmu, perbaiki apa yang salah, dan teruslah melangkah.
Jangan membenci mereka yang mengatakan hal buruk tuk menjatuhkanmu, karena merekalah yang buatmu semakin kuat setiap hari.
Terkadang, kamu berpikir seseorang telah berubah tanpa kamu menyadari hal itu terjadi karena dia mulai bersikap dewasa.
Sesuatu yang menyenangkan bagaimana seseorang mampu membuatmu tersenyum, hanya dengan memikirkan dirinya. Happy
Jadi dirimu sendiri agar ketika seseorang mencintai, kamu tak perlu takut jika dia akan temukan dirimu bukan orang yang ingin dia cintai.
Perasaan yang paling berbahaya adalah iri, karena iri hati melahirkan kebencian dan kebencian akan membunuhmu perlahan.
Tak peduli seperti apa hidupmu, kamu selalu punya pilihan untuk melihat dari sisi baiknya atau sisi buruknya.
Hanya karena seseorang terlihat kuat di hadapanmu, tak berarti dia bisa begitu kuat ketika tanpamu.
Jangan selalu katakan "masih ada waktu" atau "nanti saja". Lakukan segera, gunakan waktumu dengan bijak.
Hidup terlalu singkat jika hanya menyesal. Hidup hanya sekali, namun jika digunakan dengan baik, sekali saja cukup!
Hidup ini bukan hanya mencari yang terbaik, namun lebih kepada menerima kenyataan bahwa kamu adalah kamu. Jadi dirimu sendiri.
Orang yang bijak adalah yang tahu siapa yang harus dia percaya. Orang yang lebih bijak adalah dia yang selalu bisa dipercaya.
Sadarilah, mengeluh tidak menyelesaikan apapun. Mengeluh hanya akan menambah beban dihati. Berhentilah mengeluh, segera bertindak!
Jangan jadikan kegagalan kemarin sebagai penghambat hari ini. Semangat untuk membuat hari esok lebih baik, melalui hari ini.
Perbuatan adalah cerminan isi hati. Jika hati dipenuhi kebaikan, maka sikap dan tindakan akan baik, pun sebaliknya.
Orang yang malas telah membuang kesempatan yang diberikan Tuhan, padahal Tuhan tidak pernah menciptakan sesuatu dengan sia-sia.
Jangan nilai orang dari masa lalunya karena kita semua sudah tidak hidup di sana. Semua orang bisa berubah, biarkan mereka membuktikannya.
Jadikan kepandaian sebagai kebahagiaan bersama, sehingga mampu meningkatkan rasa ikhlas tuk bersyukur atas kesuksesan.
Kadang kamu harus buat keputusan tuk mengalah, atau kamu akan kehilangan dia yang kamu cinta hanya karena kamu keras kepala.
Dalam cinta, ketika ada yang berbeda, jangan mencari siapa yang salah, karena kamu dan dia adalah tim yang sama dengan tujuan yang sama.
Orang yang bisa mengendalikan emosinya adalah pemenang hidup sejati.
Jika bertanya, jangan mendiktekan jawabannya, agar informasi baru bisa bertamu.
Sebenarnya tantangannya bukan me-manage waktu tapi me-manage diri kita sendiri.
Anda mengetahui apa yang sharusnya tidak dilakukan ketika Anda "gagal". Jadi Anda menciptakan pengetahuan baru dan itu bukan kegagalan.
Lebih mudah melakukan sesuatu dengan benar daripada menjelaskan mengapa Anda tidak melakukannya dengan benar.
Seringkali kamu ragu untuk mengucapkan apa yang ada dihatimu karena kamu tidak yakin dia akan mendengarkanmu.
Yang penting itu bukan apa yang kita ketahui tapi apa yang kita bersedia pelajari.
Jgn menyerang orang karena iri ; dengki agar relasi dan rejeki terus bersemi dalam hidup ini.
Pria, Jika wanita marah, ajaklah dia berbelanja atau ke salon. Niscaya amarahnya langsung hilang.
Meski disakiti berkali-kali, wanita bijak tetap bisa memafkan dan semakin tegar seperti batu karang.
Makanan enak yang ditawarkan ke pria yang sedang marah, akan memedam amarahnya.
Menangis mungkin bukan solusi tapi terkadang dapat menjadi obat penenang.
Wanita bijak seperti angsa diatas air. Anggun namun tetap bekerja. Tetap tegar meski terluka.
Jangan pikirkan kegagalan kemarin, hari ini sudah lain, sukses pasti diraih selama semangat masih menyengat.
Marilah kita membaikkan diri, sebelum menyesal pun tidak ada gunanya.
Wahai Yang Maha Lembut,manjakanlah hatiku yang sendiri ini, bahagiakanlah aku dalam pernikahan yang penuh cinta, yang mesra, yang setia.
Wahai Yang Maha Cinta, sandingkanlah aku dengan jiwa pilihan-Mu, yang karena kebaikanku - baikkanlah ia, tapi jika ia lebih baik - baikkanlah aku.