Senin, 07 April 2014

Identifying narrative paragraph with and without topic sentence


Failure in a life
Failure is not the end of the struggle , but it is a way to reach the goal . Man was created filled with limitations. Want to not have a lot of money , want the house yet to work , want a job well established yet graduated college , want to be successful but the mission and vision of life has not been settled .
Truly Allah is Fair has created the whole universe , with all the limitations that exist , human beings occupy the highest place of Allah than others . He gives us a sense to enhance our limitations , He gave us a conscience that never lie , He also gives us a beautiful corpse again perfect .
" Why is my life always like this ,  fail and by no means? "
" Will there be a tomorrow full of bubbly for I ? "
" Shall Allah forgiveness is there for I ? "
" Are there any future for I ? "
As if my little heart wondering , there still future better for me .Wonderful future for me to live . I'm still confused by all of this , why there should be a failure in life , as if in a life no failure then everyone would be successful and there are no poor . This question is always there in every human soul . Great desire to live a quiet , happy , success is the dream of all of us. The desire to achieve success , Achievement , innovative , productive lies in how much we are able to put themselves in the Allah who has created us with all these limitations . We have never been able to resist the deadly pick at any time . We also never be able to act when the maximum effort has turned out we still failed. Nor can we delay the age has been increased . What can we do ? We as humans just could not accept what has been given by Allah.
About 2 years ago I had never experienced anything that made me give up and do not want to continue it all. When I want to sign up to a college that I dreamed and dreamed not received it which made me give up on applying to other universities . That morning around 08:00 pm I was with my uncle went to the Jakarta State University to register as a prospective student there . At that moment I select Prodi Busana Butik is because there is still time to do with my expertise in vocational schools first so I decided to continue her education with study programs that I like . And then I was required to pay a registration fee around Rp.250,000 , - . Jakarta State University itself is located in Rawamangun , East Jakarta , the university was also very spacious and looks beautiful . Tomorrow day I start running tests . And at that time registration began at 08:00 and I was in a test with 100 questions given general within 120 minutes and at that time I was working on the matter very carefully and cautiously and eventually time ran out . After working on the tests I went home to Tangerang to rest , a place where my father worked and lived there . Already 11 years my father worked in Jakarta and if there is a need then he returned to Lampung for a few days . A few days later the announcement of a candidate for student / i at the Jakarta State University was already spread through online , and I can not wait to see result . I went to check whether I was accepted or not at the university , and in the end the things I 've been waiting for is not satisfactory for me because I was not welcome at the University . My feelings were mixed time between sad , disappointed , and angry because the University does not accept that I liked and I decided to go to Lampung . And after I arrived in Lampung STAIN I also signed up in Metro City . At that moment I experienced a failure , I signed up there already 3x not received well and I was desperate not want to study anymore . And on the last registration I decided to enroll at the Muhammadiyah University of Metro . In the latter option eventually I was accepted at the University although not my choice but I live to this day . I began to accept and love it even though the heart does not want to be in this university but I'm glad to be part of the Muhammadiyah University .



NOTE :
Analyze the text
Theme                         : Failure in a life
Cha                                         Characteristic Dyah   : easy to give up, passion, want to get up
Her                                          Her parent                  : Care
Uncle                           : Care and Good
Introduction                :  About 2 years ago I had never experienced anything that made me give up and do not want to continue it all
Plot                              : Forward - Back
Climax                         : And on the last registration I decided to enroll at the Muhammadiyah University of Metro . In the latter option eventually I was accepted at the University although not my choice but I live to this day . I began to accept and love it even though the heart does not want to be in this university but I'm glad to be part of the Muhammadiyah University .
RED                            : Orientation 
BLUE                          : Complication
GREEN                      : Reorientation
            DARK BLUE             : Coda


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